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Even if you understand what character arc is in concept, you may still feel confused about how to actually make it show up in your script.
The truth is, character arc shows up scene by scene. Thinking about it that way will help you build an effective character arc that deepens the story.
This varies by individual movie, of course, but if we're talking patterns and generalities, this is usually how it goes:
Theme is what the movie is really about, e.g. the message, meaning, or subtext. The character arc is the journey of accepting the theme. So what the movie is really about is the character arc.
It makes sense, then, that most scenes should contribute to this big, over-arching idea that the movie is about. Individual scenes are the building blocks of the character arc, or the steps along the transformation.
Character arc is a cumulative effect. Each point on the arc creates context for the others. They depend on each other.
If too few scenes contribute then the arc is spotty, maybe not even a discernible, complete path at all, and what the script is really about doesn’t come through.
Because it’s the holiday season, I re-watched The Family Man to use as today’s example. If you’re not familiar with this Nic Cage classic, here’s a logline:
And here’s a simple story chart so you have an overview of the story we’re working with:
(Download a PDF of the chart, if you'd like. The Family Man simple story chart.pdf)
Initially Jack measures success only by how much money he earns and how cushy his life can be, but as he spends more time in his new life he comes to value love and family more than money.
And that’s what the movie is really about: without love and family, our lives aren’t as great, no matter what we accomplish.
So when we look at individual scenes, we should be able to see that virtually every one contributes to the arc playing out over the whole movie.
Act 1 is where we see the “before” picture, aka the character’s starting point. It shows us an attitude or behavior that is getting in the way of the character’s happiness, even if he doesn’t see it that way.
And Act 3 is where the transformation is confirmed, aka the character’s ending point. It’s where we see the shift in attitude or behavior that now allows him to be happier or healthier in some specific way.
But Act 2 is where the magic happens. It’s where this particular set of plot events challenges the “before” version of the character, and causes the transformation into the “after” picture.
In The Family Man, Act 2 begins as we see:
The next several scenes are funny promise-of-the-premise-type scenes that show fancy city guy Jack in the life of a suburban dad: walking the dog in the snow, coming home to find Kate already asleep in her flannel pajamas, waking to a crying baby with a smelly diaper to be changed. And you might be thinking, “How do these scenes push Jack toward change?”
But you have to remember that transformation is a process. The character can’t be willing to change, especially not right away. So things can't be easy. If the new life is all rainbows and unicorns and there’s no reason not to be thrilled to be here, then where’s the conflict?
And the eventual change feels more meaningful if we know what he’s giving up (quiet mornings, no dirty diapers, sexy time with ladies in lingerie). We understand that the new life is worth the trade off.
It’s also among these scenes that Jack starts to see the good stuff he gets with this life, too: a wife he’s still attracted to and seems to be in love with, and adorable, funny, clever kid(s), all of whom really love him. Yes this life is just as bad as he always assumed, but it’s also more precious than he ever knew. Every scene serves some part of that idea.
You can also think of the transformation as both deconstruction and reconstruction and use this as a way to brainstorm scenes to fully build out the character arc.
It’s a way of thinking about how the events and experiences are forcing the protagonist to question, re-evaluate, and let go of the “old” way or identity, and then to see, accept, and embrace the “new” way.
Or deconstructing the “old me” and reconstructing the character’s point of view, life philosophy, or way of being and doing. Constructing a “new me” that we see by the end of the movie.
If we look at some scenes from the reconstruction portion of Jack’s arc:
But things are never too linear along the arc. We want a little forward-and-backward, which comes from testing the transformation that’s beginning to take hold.
And we could go on and on, through each scene, identifying the contribution to the character arc and what the story is really about.
Can you say the same for your screenplay?
Here are some prompts to get you thinking:
And something we didn’t cover today but may be useful in your process: think about the supporting characters and how they help or hinder as the protagonist makes this transformation.
For example, Kate’s values and love for Jack are two primary forces that cause his change. And Jack’s best friend is there to nudge him in the right direction at key moments.
That’s it for today!
Until next time,
Naomi
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